Love Died- Lune Poem – day 9 of April

When you broke her heart
the love died
It won’t ever come back

A Lune Poem is an American version of a Haiku with a 3 lines made up of 13 syllable broken up into a 5-3-5.

One thought on “Love Died- Lune Poem – day 9 of April

  1. Raivenne says:

    Almost perfect. Lune poems are generally written left aligned so that the form takes on a kind of “C” or crescent shape, called a Kelly Lune, like the heavenly body from which the form gets its name.

    There’s also a 3-5-3 verse called a Collom Lune which loosely takes on a 3/4 moon shape.

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s