Autumn’s Fall – dVerse Trimeric Challenge

Light gales move and drop the leaves
The shades of color do magic weave
The storms we shall weather together
The sunburst jewels on the trees come apart with their final beauty

The shades of color do magic weave
As we step on the brightly crunchy floor covering
Hand in hand we walk on this and all future brisk autumn’s eve

The storms we shall weather together
You and I as one are tougher than leather
Warm and strong in its embrace, but its caress as soft as a feather

The sunburst jewels on the trees come apart with their final beauty
Though you and I begin this journey
Let the autumn’s fall be our guide that brings us through our union duty

Thanks for the challenge Mary.
dVerse challenge to write a Trimeric poem which is a poem with four stanzas.
The first stanza has four lines, and the next three stanzas have three lines each, with the first line of each repeating the respective line of that first stanza. There is no requirement for line length, meter, or rhyme.
The Sequence of lines in a Trimeric looks like this: ABCD, B**, C**, D**

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17 thoughts on “Autumn’s Fall – dVerse Trimeric Challenge

  1. Wind trees..
    Fall Breeze..
    Leave fall..
    Cool skips steps

    Fall Breeze..
    Seasons change..
    Easy breathe comes..

    Leave Fall..
    Winter come..
    Spring Yet..

    Cool skips steps
    Spring rise fall..
    Summer Bright again..:)

    • amplewoman says:

      Thanks and oh no keep summer away unless it’s going to be 75-80 degrees all the time with no humidity….I’m going to enjoy my short Autumn season.

      • Yes.. Smiles.. Living in Florida.. Fall brings great respite from Summer heat.. And with be festival season.. It is one of my favorite times of the year.. But they are all favorite to me..:)

  2. This is an exquisite portrayal of autumn, Lyn. Perfect for the form.

  3. Mary says:

    Autumn is so inspirational, isn’t it? I really enjoyed this Trimeric, and I think you managed to compare both the inner storms to the autumn storms….

  4. Sumana Roy says:

    the words shine like autumn colors…beautiful..

  5. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) says:

    A nice evocation of autumn.

  6. I like how the emotions are mirrored in that autumn walk. The crunching of leaves is so precise.

  7. Sanaa Rizvi says:

    The storms we shall weather together
    You and I as one are tougher than leather

    Love this – it truly depicts how a relationship gets stronger with time and the hurdles that come in between. Beautifully executed.

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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